I admire your enthusiasm, but you may want to look up the "12 basic principles of animation". I say this not to discourage you though. Your animation is lacking the majority of the fundamentals, and would be much improved by them. minyos.its.rmit.edu.au/aim/a_n…
For instance, your character has to anticipation in his jump. His knees don't bend. The body seems too rigid, and doesn't have actual movement. You are lacking in the slowing in and slowing out, as well. You do have squash and stretch, which is good. The facial expessions could also use some more exaggeration. Other than that, a good attempt.
I know them the 12 basic principles already! I have learned them in multimedia course sometimes, plus I read part of it in book , I looked at it in the internet too and I even looked at it in the movies such as the one that was awarded included as intro before the toy's story movie! but that's not the problem! the problem is that forget about them! or I am just too lazy to think about them all when I plan my animation!! XDD
You're a good animator; I have a lot of respect for your ambition! But don't spread yourself too thin on this project. Use GoAnimate. The work will go by much quicker that way.
yeah about that... will I don't like GoAnimate I feel it kills my ability because GoAnimate is limitited to few stuff! plus I don't like their voice acting and I hate their watermarks!
thanks for the advice! maybe this shows you how it limited and If I wanted that pose for example: abdulla-a.deviantart.com/art/A…
I am working on a trailer when I complete it I will polish everything! because what I am doing is quickly finishing stuff!
if you find anything wrong with my stuff please tell me what is it's problem so I can upgrade my abilities!
For instance, your character has to anticipation in his jump. His knees don't bend. The body seems too rigid, and doesn't have actual movement. You are lacking in the slowing in and slowing out, as well.
You do have squash and stretch, which is good. The facial expessions could also use some more exaggeration. Other than that, a good attempt.
thanks for the advice!
maybe this shows you how it limited and If I wanted that pose for example:
abdulla-a.deviantart.com/art/A…
I am working on a trailer when I complete it I will polish everything! because what I am doing is quickly finishing stuff!
if you find anything wrong with my stuff please tell me what is it's problem so I can upgrade my abilities!